Dear Mrs Baker
My mum is the best mum ever because she cares for me and loves me. Every morning she makes my lunch and my breakfast. When I’m very sick she takes me to the doctors. She also gives me soup. She helps me do my homework and tells me to go to sleep.
She gets us presents on Christmas and on our birthday. On Christmas she goes out and comes back with a bag for each one of us.
That is why my mum is the best mum in the world.
Yours Sincerely,
Eparama
6 comments:
how sweet Eparama.
By sheralee
Hi Eparama
You have done a good job of telling the readers about the things your mum does for you.
Well done
Mrs Tofa
how sweet. You are really lucky.
from venessa
hey Eparama. nice use of words in your writing.Interesting story.your mum does sound like the best mum ever!.
By Anonymous!
you are so lucky. your mum does sound like the best mum in the world
Dear Eparama
You have an exceptional mother, it is very comforting to know that there are children like yourself out there that would take the time to put their feelings on paper for all to see. Your mother would be very proud.
Kia Manuia
Venessa's mother
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