As part of our description writing learning experience. Our class walked down to the Dunkirk Reserve and we used our five senses to describe what surrounded us on that beautiful morning. This is my descriptive writing and please leave a comment.
Walking along Dunkirk
Walking across the rough cement path and crossing the smooth roads with the the beautiful bright sun shining on our attractive faces. It almost feels like we’re on the pathway towards Heaven.
Stopping at the wonderful sight of green, wet and pointy grass, it was a beautiful and very peaceful sight of nature.
The kids of Aotearoa getting their bottoms wet as we sit on the mighty fine green grass writing superb description about our surroundings.
The light blue sky held over our heads covered with light and dark blue clouds, filled with little raindrops about to burst.
The sight of the amazing grey coloured water flowing towards you brings tingle to your heart.
Just the massaging feeling you get when you walk along the shore, feeling the shells crack as you step on them brings you a feeling of great anxiety.
Birds soaring in a handfuls across the sparkling eye blinding water.
This is nature at its very best.
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