Tuesday, February 22, 2011

Dear Mum and Dad

Dear mum and Dad

Hi this is Veisinia I am writing this letter to tell you about my first days at Tamaki Intermediate.

On Wednesday the 2nd of February 2011, was the day I started Tamaki Intermediate with a big great smile. I was a bit nervous but I was with my brother and that made me feel really happy. The teachers started calling the names for the classes and then I was called out to be in Room 3 with Mrs Tofa.I was really thrilled to be in my brother’s old class.

During interval was a relief because my brother brought me some yummy food from the tuck shop and I got to meet new students and play with them. Getting to meet your old friends from primary
is a great feeling.

Sports is one of the things that I like about Tamaki intermediate, because you play a lot of sports and you get to try out for tournaments like the girls softball team and the boys softball team. At first you go and sign your name up on a piece of paper, you practice, then you play a little bit of a game, then finally they choose the team. It is really fun once you get to be in the team.

Learning inside the classrooms is very cool.Mrs Tofa makes my learning so interesting in extension.You have to learn to do your work with no chatting and you have to strive to complete your work with excellence.

My first day was really awesome and so much fun. I got to meet new friends and see very familiar faces from primary.

Yours sincerely
Veisinia

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

Dear Veisinia,
Hi I really like your letter. I like it because it tels a lot about your first couple of weeks at school. I agree about Mrs Parker Tofa she is the best. Well good work and keep it up.

veisinia said...

hello veisinia great piece of work you've got there.

Anonymous said...

HI VEISINIA!!!,

I love your story it is so cool,I love it,love it,love it so much!!
BYE!!

from Keedin
xxxxxxxxxxx

Anonymous said...

Hi Veisinia,

I like your story it is so cool.I hope you will have a great year in your new school and new class.

By Saia

Shaye said...

Dear Veisinia.
I thought your letter was very inspiring and sweet. You have good expression and vocabulary.good work

Anonymous said...

Hello Veisinia,

!wow! we think your work is superb.We really love your adjectives and other words that you put in to this work. Keep up the magnificent work and one day you might recieve an award soon. We wish you good luck for the rest of the term.
From Tatiana and Tamika

Anonymous said...

go vaisinia!!!!!
love it!!!!!!
write some more writing lyke dat
and not being shy.... ohhhhh hard out be head girl????? well maybe..
but anyway love your conclusion!!!!!
keep it up!!!!
by irasa

meleana said...

Hello this story is very nice and amazing.I think you will have fun in your intermediate years.

Kaisara said...

Dear Veisinia,
this a very good piece of work keep it up!!!!!

Anonymous said...

Hi Veisinia,
This such a good piece of work. Keep up the good work!!
Kaisara

Martha said...

really neat piece of writing and u are truly gifted in wrting.

From Martha