Friday, March 18, 2011

Maria's recount on Constable Paul's visit

Paul visits Room 3

On Wednesday 16th of March when we were in the ICT room Constable Paul from the New Zealand Police came and spoke to us about truancy and behaviour.

Constable Paul Grey said that truancy was when someone missed school for no reason. We also can’t just tell our parents that we are going to school then walk around the streets without coming to school. If someone is caught truanting the police will go to their houses and ask why they are not coming to school. He said no one should want that.


Then he talked about behaviour. He said that we have to concentrate at school and be good. We can’t be stupid during class as well. We have to pay attention and if we don’t concentrate we will miss out on our learning.

I really enjoyed listening to Constable Paul Grey. He is a really good policeman.

7 comments:

Mrs Tofa said...

Hi Maria this is a really good recount.You have structured your writing well and have included clear details of what Constable Paul said.

IRASA said...

HI THERE YOU HAVE WRITTEN A GOOD RECOUNT ON WHAT HAPPENED WHEN CONSTABLE PAUL CAME. KEEP ON WORKING HARD
FROM IRASA

Tatiana said...

Hi Maria,

You done a really great piece of writing. You also made me think about the truancy bit. I really enjoyed reading your writing. Keep up the good work.

From,
Tatiana

Kaisara said...

hi there maria this writing is very interesting and that i can understand every single word you wrote. Keep it up.

From Kaisara

Martha said...

Wow what a great piece of writing I wish I could write like that.

From Martha

Martha said...

This is cool writing. It is was good that the policeman and women came to our school to about truancy and why it is important to come to school every day.

From Martha

Martha said...

this is an excellent piece of writing. It was cool that the police came to school to talk about truancy.