On one cold misty night on the 22nd of June 2010, Zuzu gazed out the window and saw a swirl of strong wind taking the leaves into a slow dance in the misty air. She was practicing her ballet routine for her school event by herself and all of a sudden she heard weird sounds coming from the stadium outside.
She ran into the stadium at the speed of lightning and saw no one. She then walked around looking for where the strange noises came from. Her heart was beating like thunder, her teeth were chattering like cups during an earthquake.
Stomp, stomp she hears someone moving around. Her heart started to beat faster and faster. She felt the presence of the person getting closer and closer. Her mind was telling her to run but her heart was beating so fast she could not make a move.
Just before she opened her mouth to scream, she saw the person move closer and realised it was her friend Bridget who was playing a trick on her.
10 comments:
Haha that so funny.
Hey girls,
I relly enjoyed reading your narrative and i really liked the entrance of your story.
from lotu
Interesting similies were used in the story.It was fun to read.
By Apelu
Hey Afu and Vaegaau .
I love your writing . Good vocabulary and awesome descriptive words. Keep up the good work.
Lana ...
Peace ..
Hey Afu and Vaegaau.
I like your piece of writing.
Good vocabulary and awesome descriptive words. Keep up the good work.
Lana ..
Peace ..
Hi Vaegaau and Afu your story was well sequenced and descriptive.
Hey Vaegaau and Afu! Great narrative. You two have a great imagination. Keep up the great work!
By Erika
ohh sorry then mean story
hhahahahah this is so funny !!!!!!
keep it up.
irasa
Hi Afu and Vaegaau great story.
Your story made me get goosebumps halfway but at the end I was relieved.Beautiful writing.Keep up the great work.
HAHAHA...
Thats so funny
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